1、Last Saturday Iwent to the Great Wall with some of my friends. In our way up, we saw manyvolunteers working in the sun. They helped the elders with their bags, tookphoto for some tourists and answered people"s questions. Because they were verytired, they didn"t stop to have a rest. Just at the moment, we saw a little boystanding alone, cried. We went over and asked what is the matter. From hisanswer we knew he couldn"t find her mother. We told him not to worry and thenwe tried to get in the touch with his mother with the phone number he had givenus.  Twenty minutes late, his mother turned up, and thanked us again andagain. That day we enjoyed the beauty of the Great Wall, and felt the warm ofthe society. If everyone can reach out helping to others, the world will bemore harmonious.

第一处：on one’s way是固定搭配，表示“在……的路上”，故In改成On。

第二处：photo为可数名词，拍照不只是一张照片，此处应该用复数形式，故photo改成photos。

第三处：由句意可知，此处表示让步而不是原因，故Because改成 Though/Although。

第四处：由句子结构可知此处使用非谓语动词，a little boy与cry之间是逻辑上的主谓关系，所以用现在分词作伴随状语，故cried 改成 crying。

第五处：讲述的是发生在过去的事情，应该用一般过去时，故is 改成was。

第六处：此处指的是小男孩的妈妈，故her改成 his。

第七处：get in touch with是固定短语，表示“取得联系”，故去掉the。

第八处：late是形容词，later是副词，表示“……以后”，故late改成 later。

第九处：由句子结构可知此处用名词作动词felt的宾语，故warm改成warmth。

第十处：reach out a helping是固定搭配，表示“伸出援手”，故在helping前加a。

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